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Ask not the sun why she sets
Why she shrouds her light away
Or why she hides her glowing gaze
When night turns crimson gold to grey
For silent falls the guilty sun
As day to dark does turn
One simple truth she dare not speak:
Her light can only blind and burn
No mercy for the guilty
Bring down their lying sun
Blood so silver black by night
Upon their faces pale white
Cruel moon, bring the end
The dawn will never rise again
Why she shrouds her light away
Or why she hides her glowing gaze
When night turns crimson gold to grey
For silent falls the guilty sun
As day to dark does turn
One simple truth she dare not speak:
Her light can only blind and burn
No mercy for the guilty
Bring down their lying sun
Blood so silver black by night
Upon their faces pale white
Cruel moon, bring the end
The dawn will never rise again
The dawn is still young...
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Heartfelt Commentary For Exquisite Literature
The covenant sun, broad amongst its fellow sons and daughters.
Brute and over beloved Sun,
Whisked and tainted by the sleeking earth of Eve,
Yet heavily induced with opium from the risen scars of its light.
The monstrous son of sin, the overlapping light of Sun...
Its scars and over coddled blue illness,
It raises in triumph cry to stop the bleeding sand,
But rather than overcoming his opium fears, his divorced overdose....
He lye silent, sheepish,
Helpless....
In such a piece that is told quite beautifully, shouldn't be left so much a moment in the dark.
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